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 Comments Hey thanks for the critique, Nelde!
 I'm not sure I understand the comment about only changing the pirate's face between the 2nd and 3rd panel though... I gave him kind of an angry-ish expression in the 1st panel (corners of the mouth drawn down, eyebrow drawn in and down) whereas in the 2nd panel I gave him a surprised / excited expression (corners of the mouth turned up in a smile, jaw slack, eyes wide open and eyebrow raised)  You're welcome.
What I meant to say was that the only difference between the pirate in the second panel and the one in the third was his facial expression. And that I thought it was a pity that you only changed his expression and nothing else. |
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It tells a funny story and sums up so much of the Internet in only three panels.
The characters are lovely drawn and I especially like the expressions.
What could be improved is the copy-pasting. It's ok for the bush and the house, because they stay the same and don't move. But I think it's a pity that you only changed the pirate's face between the second and the third panel. I know that it's easier this way but in my opinion the comic would gain much quality if you made some minor adjustments to the pirate in the last panel.
But all in all it's a great deviation, I think everyone can agree with the moral and the comic surely motivates us to live up to it in our lives.